This was more of an experiment with some new brushes and a technique than anything.
I think my take-away here is "make the line work more readable", probably would work better on a single character than trying to draw two characters in a choppa.
Edit: So I guess I didn't notice the fact I made the foreground rocks and the background rocks the same tonal value, since the background rocks should have had less contrast with the background since they are further away. Oops. That will be something to keep in mind for the future I guess.
to GET TO DA CHOPPA!!! I always thought of a choppa as a helicopter... I don't think he had a motorcycle in the jungle...